Life

by Elissa   Jun 2, 2005


Lost in all your fears
Your screaming but no one hears
All you have left are tears

You don't know what to do
They're screaming at you
But this isn't new

Something is always wrong
The road just seems to long
And you are no longer strong

You hate your life
It's filled with to much strife
So you planned to end it with a knife

You failed at attempting suicide
And the scar you now have to hide
But Still they don't notice the hurt inside

You know why you want to die
And why you always cry
It's the reason you get high

You just feel so much pain
There's nothing left to gain
And now your standing in the rain

Hoping your mistakes will wash away
Your depression won't stay
And things will get better the next day

-I tried something new not sure if its good or not though, please vote and comment-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    I felt the deep, depression, but the end stanza didn't really complete it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    Loved your poem, i can relate, i'm here if you need me! babyflirt2315@yahoo.com.

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    Loved your poem, i can relate, i'm here if you need me! babyflirt2315@yahoo.com.

  • 18 years ago

    by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]

    not good or not, lol it had damn be good if its from you!! i loved it 5/5, yay* instuments play and loud applauses* lol we're such doofs, *the room fills with laughter* see what i mean?! lol. i wrote a poem about life and shitoofy lol, and suicide called, life and the world and what it does to me. its good in my opinion, which isnt professional either lol, no surprise.
    love always
    your friend
    harley/your double doof friend lol

  • 18 years ago

    by lindsey

    yes it's good..And life sux but you'll always make it through the rain..Always member after every tear comes a rainbow..i've been there i'm still goin through rough times but i'm never gonna give up i'm gonna hold on and u should 2..And by the way terrific poem..Great job..<3 lindsey

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