Great poem ... 5/5

Some suggestions for the untitled...
Walking in Terror
Transformation
The Newfound Craving

They all came to mind. Tell me what you think.

ooooohh, kick @$$, *croud jumps and screams in overjoy of such a gruesomely awesome poem* woooyeaa right on WOOOOOYAAAAAA
lol were so derangly funny
i submitted yet another two poems and i got another award, did you see it?! *applauds self* yay
love always
your dumb blonde friend
harley

Great vampire poem. I like how you made the reader guess, and didn't come right out and say that she was bitten by a vampire. Excellent!!!

Holds alot of depth and darkness.. I loved it.. You never cease to amaze me. Nicely done once again.. Take care and keep writing (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

i like it
(5)

very nice
it flowed wonderfully
keep up the good work

u are very talented. keep it up

That's so gross!

the ending i wasnt expecting but it was a great poem, i think it sounds like the poems that i write but they were different all at the same time, keep writing i like your style

wow...very haunting...

5.5

love and hugs