Liquid change.

by Sean   Jun 5, 2005


Control,
My body in motion,
Step by step,
Thought by thought.

Choice,
Liquid temptation,
Controlled choice,
Drink, flooding through.

Slowly,
Changes,
Body in staggered halts,
Misstep by misstep,
Male thoughts,
To male thoughts.

Company,
All friends, girl’s maybe
Flirtatious,
“I love you”
A sly, obvious hand reaching.

Changed,
Out of control…
Collapsing,
Staggering,
Falling.

Aware of secret desires,
Hidden by hatred of men,
Cheating?
Blame the liquid, which boils inside,
You’re a different person, bastard.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    A great poem, mate, but it suffers a little with the uneven form.

    Don't try and change it, it works well, but in the future try re-reading your poem like you would a song before you post.

    A poem that flows well reads better.

    Again, a good effort and strong message.

    B

  • 18 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    i like this poem a lot you have a unique style and i love it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    I love your writing. It is amazing. Not just this poem, but every masterpiece you've created is brilliant. You have a beautiful way with words.

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