The Hidden Relationship

by The Flame Within   Jun 7, 2005


Every second every minute of every day is every time i hurt whenever your away because every word of every line is when i feel you are mine

when every i am near you, every muscle in my body becomes tight, because every time i am with you feels right

but these feelings we have, the relationship we share, the way how for one another we care

can never be seen, because people want us apart, with that thought, I'm not sure where my sadness starts

but in secret, we feel, hidden from anyones view, is when my arms are able to hold you

i would rather be unseen with you, and never tell, then never have what we have and live in Hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by girlii797

    wow this is different then your normal poems. But equally good...

    keep up the good work.

    ~girlii797

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Omg......SOOOOO GOOD!!! That sounds like a sad kind of love. Sort of unhealthy, but love is love. I'm glad you still stand strong in it. GREAT job!!! :-D!!

    Love you lots~!~

    ~Sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    good poem and i love it keep it up and it touched me alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    aww... so sweet. this is beautiful!!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Eden

    Very good poem. It really touched me. Keep up the good work, I can't wait until your next one!

    Eden