Times Ending...

by David   Jun 7, 2005


Times have come to a end,
And now a hole is passed by the wind,
Which once once filled with love and joy,
But can only be used now as a toy,
I never knew love would hurt this much,
And that i could even feel such,
Such pain that weakens my body,
And all you can act is naughty,
You go behind my back at night,
And lie so I have to believe but not by sight,
You used to tell me you loved me all the time,
But now its different and i only get one when you mime,
And you tell me you don't want to make me sad,
but go off and hurt my heart with things you know will hurt me bad,
I dreamed of you last night,
Being alone and this very bright light,
Cutting away for all the pain i've suffered,
And then trying to hide them buffering,
buffering your scars that fill your skin,
And you wonder why you can never win,
Maybe its because theres someone else in my life that treats me right,
She shows me she loves me and she never fights,
It still won't ever be the same without you,
But if you can't stop to think why i feel so blue,
!nd change and give me all that you can,
Than there will never be us women and man,
For you give it all away to the person you hate most,
but if thats what you want then thats what you post,
I'll always give into you so heres your chance,
And maybe the last chance i'll ever give for romance,
The choice is up to you,
And the choice is what you'll do.

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  • 18 years ago

    by StMario

    Your poems speaks of your relationship with a young lady, that may not see the love that you have for her... I am not giving advise, but from my stand point, I would fine myself, began to love myself, not for her but for myself.. then do somethings for myself.

    Love is full of emotions good and bad, if a lady or man love someone, they learn them, trust them, cater to them, give to them and respect them.

    In relationships you have to give 100% a piece... 50/50 wont do. Seeing eye to eye, giving one their space and bringing something to the table besides sex, tht is another story.. women want to be loved from the head before getting into bed... that is when you know you have a good one. Be strong..

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    Great write, thanksfor the comment, too. You expressed it really well, even though I do not know the feeling, I can get a pretty clear picture from the words you put together : )
    Great job, 5/5 from me.
    XxX
    Robin

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Munchkin♥

    You never did say what she did... ? lol... sorry I haven't been check stuff for a while. I will keep checking from now on though. love always xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    well see she talks to her old bf's and this guy that i just hate terribly. im so over protective over her, i know its bad but i wouldnt want anyone to mess things up between me and her and we always fight i mean always. theres many ways but i will tell you in a minute i have to do something for a sec brb
    ~David~

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Munchkin♥

    hey... thank you so much for your comment... i'm glad some people understand even if the love of my life doesn't. I know people say 16 is too young to be in love but you can't control how, when, where and with who you fall in love... love is blind and confusing but it still IS... no-one can change that. I hope your ex realises she can't do any better than a guy like you... if you dont mind me asking how did she hurt you? cheat? or more like my man... in many ways? great poem... i'll be sure to read more... take care xxx

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