My Life (sorry its so short)

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Jun 8, 2005


Waiting, stalling
yelling, falling
this is what my life is
accusations and,
temptations
this is what it is
singing,writing,
talking, fighting
and my life has just begun
hoping, praying,
wondering, waiting
wanting this to be done
fighting, cutting,
trying, running
these scars will never mend
losing, crying,
living dying
my life has reached its end

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This poem has good rhythm. It is a fast read and that is why I like it. It is short and to the point.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    LOVE IT! wonderfully penned! 5/5
    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I think you've said it quite good, and that was enough. You've expressed youself in such a great way.. not many people have the ability to do that. Be proud of it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Hey this poem is really good and to me it sounds done you did a great job. Keep on writing. Much luv
    ~Nikki~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    as i lye in a pool of my own blood, all i can think is how sorry i must be..

    God can u hear me ... im sorry for all the trouble ive been....

    then i see a bright light and all is lost...

    then i here a great voice say do you want another chance?

    and he leaves you to choose?

    should i choose life or death?

    i'll leave that up to you

    ok how is that? all i can say is that i tried

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