Something Hidden

by LadyWaszky   Jun 8, 2005


Things you can't explain,
are living in my soul.
have torn away my heart,
and have left me freezing cold.

i cannot bare to live with this,
but you tell me "don't give in"
I'm not sure that your hope
will help me through this sin.

you hold me tight and say to me
that you'll never let me go.
but there's something deep inside your eyes,
and it should've been unknown.

this pathway leads into your soul
your eyes tell me to come inside
i try to fight my temptation,
afraid of what I'll find.

the depths of your twisted soul.
are exactly what i had thought
they are as black as black can be
and this blackness can't be fought.

Things i can't explain,
are living in your soul.
have torn away my heart,
and have left me freezing cold.

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I'm not sure if its done or if things dont flow.......
please help me...I'm having writers block!!! =(

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  • 18 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This poem is really great. I love all of your dark poems!

  • 20 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    christina...i like the verses but they dont rhyme and if i put them in it will throw off the RS..sorry..also this poem was more pointed towards me.. i was thinkin that in his eyes it showed that he was fake and was torn away from me...ya know?
    if u have suggestions for that id like them a lot!! thanks for the help!
    ~*+Random Insanity+*~

  • 20 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    ok ...

    as i look deeper into ur eyes i see that u are totured by pain.

    as u draw me closer to that pain it hurts me to know what u have been through all these forsaken years.

    u open the door way to ur inner most thoughts.. should i go in or should i ever keep?

    all i know is that u are scared and need some one to cuddle you and tell you it will be alright.

    tell me what u think..sorry its so late :)

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