Drip Drop

by Just Me   Jun 9, 2005


Drip drop drip drop
the water faucet drips slowly
drip drop drip drop
pain and misery
drip drop drip drop
is drifting slowly
drip drop drip drop
out of my body
drip drop drip drop
a knife by my side
drip drop drip drop
a wound on my wrist
drip drop drip dop
conciousness drifting slowly
drip drop drip drop
from my blank mind
drip drop drip drop
a pale face
drip drop drip drop
blood spilling freely
drip drop drip drop
onto the floor
drip drop drip drop
no ones there to save me
drip drop drip drop
my own stupidity has killed me
drip drop drip drop
death is lurking near by
drip drop drip drop
i can feel it
drip drop drip drop
tell Erin i love her
drip drop drip drop
tell Emmie i'll miss her
drip drop drip drop
tell Lynn to stay strong
drip drop drip drop
life is fading slowly
drip drop drip drop
tell Courtney I'm sorry
drip drop drip drop
tell Amy I'm still here for her
drip drop drip drop
tell Lex to relax and have some fun
drip drop drip drop
time is almost up
drip drop drip drop
tell my family i love them
drip drop drip drop
tell my friends thanks
drip drop drip drop
tell the world goodbye
drip drop drip drop
drip drop...

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  • Okkkk, too much of the drip dropping, it’ll make people think it’s gonna be too complicated to read.
    Try it like this maybe

    the water faucet drips slowly
    pain and misery
    is drifting slowly
    out of my body

    Drip drop drip drop

    a knife by my side
    a wound on my wrist
    conciousness drifting slowly
    from my blank mind

    Drip drop drip drop

    Etc if you get what I mean. It’s really good don’t get me wrong, but I think it might be better like this. I’m only saying this as you have joined the club for help on your poems and advice. That’s all I’m doing ok

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    very long poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Amazing poem!

    <3, Katie!

  • 18 years ago

    by BRoKEN_

    Great poem Kat like always
    lylasFFF
    ~Erin