sorry, i never got along with my dad and so i know that its hard cause i lost my brother who i was close too. And it was like he was my daddy cause my real dad wasn't there, he's been in and out of my life and since my mom's gone too i live with him and he's pretty cool since the last time i remember him to be.

Very lovely!!!

WOW!! thta was really great i lost a loved one when i was 7 to but it was my uncle but he was like my dad. im really sorry i know how you feall

A wonderful tribute keep his memory...

i am sorry to here this.thi peom is great.yes you will see your dad again in heven.

i am sorry to here this.thi peom is great.yes you will see your dad again in heven.

I appreciate the feeling and emotion in this. Remember that poetry is for you, no-one else... Poetry expresses and releases the inner emotions and pains etc. I like this poem, well thought of and from the heart... Keep it up I want to read more.

Stay strong, you have a great heart. Understanding is never logical.

Take care

...SiE

so sorry

im so sorry to hear that....im sorry you have to deal with that....please comment and rate on me thanks...xxx

Wow! That poem was good. Almost made me cry. I've lost alot of loved ones who got shot. Keep writing and I hope that you are going to be OK.
*DJ*

i don't have the slightest idea of how much that must still hurt you. Its so amazing how you put your feelings into a poem like this. You did an awesome job.

oh dear.. i am terribly sorry bout dad.. nice poems of you.. stay strong...

WoW!!! nice poem - even tho i hate my father - n it seems like i need a rele long time to reach this perfect level of writing.

Plz read some of my poems coz i need some advices.

great poem. I loved the way you wrote
it. wonderful job. you're so talente.
much love,
marjan

I hope your dad is resting in peace!. this is such a sad story! the man should have went to jail! he killed somebody for no reason. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss... I hope that things are getting better as the years passs...

*Heidi

Your poem was EXCELLENT..//

Waa.. so sry bout it.. you put it wonderfully in your poem. i readthis poenm before but when i re read it again.. i almost broke in tears.. hiks2.. stay strong my fren..

Great poem i loved it!!!

That was a very good poem keep up the good work

Hey so sad bout wut happend but im glad u expressed urself through this poem i really like it keep writing cuz this is very good plz rate and comment on mine as well thx