DiD that really happen to You?????

great poem, well written

omg thats horrible if that happend to you im so sorry xoxo

great write. Truely a work of art. <3333

I don't doubt that this is a good poem, and a lot of it IS original, but the lines talkin about when she's walkin home from school, "then raped and left in pain...she can't tell her parents, and it hurts to tell her friends, she doesn't know what she'll do to make this nightmare end", those lines aren't yours, u should've disclaimed them or somethin cuz all u did was thow in broken girl broken girl. The name of the poem is Another Statistic. I'll r8 a 4 for the original parts. peace

FINALLY YOU PUT SOMETHING NEW UP! Lol! love you babe...

there Ariana, i changed the lines just for you! are you happy now....w/e

Much more beautiful!

thank you

You're very welcome. I want 2 let u know that I have read your other work and they are full of emotion and wonderful though sorrowful meaning. They are very good! U don't need to take anyone else's lines, u r a tru poet at heart. Don't let anyone tell u different. Tru Peace and Happiness, //ari\\
P.s.-And I'm so sorry if this ever happened to you. Hopefully it never has.

This poem made me want to cry. it was so full of emotion that it overwelmed me. and i'm not easily overwelmed. this is a great poem. i loved it.

OMG! I'm so very sorry this happened to you! (if it was true) best of luck to sum day feel bettr!

Stay strong..alwayz!

<3, Katie

It has alot of emotion just like always.. I'm sorry this had to happen to you though. Hope you're OK just remember I'm always here.. Keep writing and keep your head held high.. take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

It has alot of emotion just like always.. I'm sorry this had to happen to you though. Hope you're OK just remember I'm always here.. Keep writing and keep your head held high.. take care (always)) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

powerful poem i hope its not true

wow its sad to know that there are people out there that can hurt other peoples lives i am so sorry but u are a speical person and it will hill...it will just take time

awwwww *hugs* that was really good keep it up *smiles*

Wow....I'm speechless, this is sooo sad and very emotional.....Hope this isn't a true story!!! great poem, strongly written....

*Hugs Sabrina*

OMG!! thats soo good!! its soo sad! did this rele happen to you? if it did.. wow.. im SOOOoo sorry! hey.. if u wana talk to me.. email me at
emmzy2004@hotmail.com
thax love you(as a friend)
xxxx
emmy

p.s i rele like all of ur poems! there soo heart felt! keep it up! 5/5 it deserves every 5!!

Omg did this really happen to you??? well if it did,then dont kill urself cuz ur an awesome poet.i love you,5/5