The Pain Behind These Smiling Eyes

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 10, 2005


The only one I want
Is the only one I'll take
So don't leave me shaking
Thinking this is all fake

I know what I don't have
Thats what kills
I was too damn stupid before
Like I was on pills

Those 3 months
Flew by too fast
I wanted it
To forever last

To see you now
As you softly laugh
Makes me not see
Where leads this path

If you could only feel
Or at least see
The pain behind these smiling eyes
Where love can't be free

I'm broken without
Life was too good before
This miserable life
Will be shut with the door

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Lol, sorry can I have a diffrent poem please, got nothing to say bout this lol:D

    it was great,the flow was the best ive seen resently, sorry :D

    one line confused me tho "I'm broken without" should it be without something? like without you or whatever?

    Sorry again lol, god I said give me a poem you need help with not a fricken excellent poem :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Megin

    thats really good 5/5
    xoxo-megan

  • 18 years ago

    by selina

    good job, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    wow great personification! i love ur poetic conventions in this one. i loved it it was great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    again amazingly written, nice work, ^.^

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