Thanks, Dad

by JustAFoolInLove   Jun 11, 2005


I feel like shit,
And it’s all your fault,
I’m dying slowly
Till life comes to a halt

Never once have I felt
Behind your cold voice
That you cared for my life,
But that was your choice

Now the choice is mine
I use it with care
My life and suffering
Is the death taxi’s fare

But living this day
And tomorrow, another
Have made grief and sorrow
My sister and brother

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Super super!

    Now--the whole death taxi's fare...that's beautiful!! Really original. Wayto make it your own! 5.5.

  • 20 years ago

    by undying blusher

    *is amazed*

    "Is the death taxi’s fare" - love that part. and it all.

    super! so sorry bout your father though...*hugs*

    xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    way to vent! lol. I'm sorry about your dad, and you really are so strong and a true inspiratin to me. I love you.

  • 20 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    oh Zach...these make me hurt...they are so hateful...i'm so sorry

  • 20 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Ooooooh... so very sad, and yet so true. I'm sorry about your daddy, hon. If neone knows what sucky dads are like... it's me. Hang in there!

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