My music

by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ   Jun 11, 2005


You asked why,
I turn my music so loud,
I just told you,
because I'm a teen.
but you don't know
that my music,
covers my tears,
and silences my screams.
no one knows,
what my music covers,
the pain it hides,
how it scares you all...
you leave me alone,
like you always do,
I hide all day,
crying and sleeping,
but sleeping is only
My temporary suicide.
soon I won't wake up,
I'll draw the line.
oh my god, I'm out of my mind.
you can't save me now,
let me fall,
like you always have,
just let me go.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This one was ok not your best but ok

  • 18 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    This is one of the worse poems I've ever read, it's terrible. You ever hear of that crazy language english? Should get around to using it. I didn't like this poems because you can't type, and there is no flow at all, I wanted to die reading this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Hmm...I gave this poem a low rating because it wasn't that good...You went off subject...and I know a lot of poems don't rhyme...but yours didn't at all I don't think, and your grammar isn't that great...I'm just trying to be honest...sorry if I offend you...Best wishes...

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 18 years ago

    by courtney

    katie don't leave us... please dont go...
    ~cort

  • 18 years ago

    by none

    Katie! Katie Katie Katie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are bringing me to tears! These poems are so good yet so sad. Please katie hang in there. So many ppl love and care about you! I hope you know that katie.
    Much Love
    ~Chelsea

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