This poem is for you Holding My Last Breath

by Amanda   Jun 13, 2005


Please be strong and hold on for a while,
Wait for me and I’ll make you smile,
We will go for a walk out in the rain,
Talk about nothing, get rid of the pain,

We’ll dance in the sun, heads held up high,
Laugh and giggle, forget the reasons why,
Life is so hard, yes we both know,
But we can’t just give up, that is a NO!

I want you to stay here and be my friend,
Don’t want you to go, this isn’t the end,
I will keep you going like you did for me,
I’ll show you the light and make you see,

You’re loved so much by everyone you know,
There are so many reasons that you cannot go,
Will be here for you always, please remember this,
Even though I do not know you, you’re someone I would miss.

Copyright 2005 – Amanda Linzi

Sorry this isn’t that good but I just wanted to cheer someone up on here. ~*Holding My Last Breath*~ this poem is for you to know that you have helped me so much and I would miss you if you went. :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Your website ??? =0) Please cheer me up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey Amanda I'm still here....I know I have been away for a while, but we don't have internet anymore, but soon I promise....I don't get to the libary that often....But sweetie you don't have to worry about me, I'm okay!!! Just been very depressed lately, my life seems so fu**ed up!!!! But I promise, that when we get the internet back, I'll be here for you again....though I always is =0)
    Great poem for a very special person, Very sweet of you =0) I loved it....
    I miss you and I promise that I'll be back soon =0)

    Love always Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by T

    I understand what your trying to say:) This poems is really good!!! I Like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    wow i like this poem i wouldn't change any of it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    What a sweet dedication! Beautifully done! Take Care! Brooke~