OMG WOW!!!!!!! Okay, tears on my cheeks :*(**** lol....wow, this is just...well, for one, it's absolutely brillliiaaannntttttt....secondly...it's so SAD omg....*sorry* lol. Wow. You're a freaking awessommeee writer hun. *makes room for you on my favorites* =D I love you. Lovely work...completely stunned...Great job...I hope it never happens to anyone either..such a sin =( there were like 3 verses that really, really hit me...I think this one the most cos I can relate..:
""What's wrong", you're always asked
You return with the same reply
"Nothing, I'm okay..." said with
a disheartened twinkle in your eye"
Awesome...you're really talented! <3 I can't wait to read more =) xxxxxx
So true Rolo, life is a gift that can be taken from us at any given time, its so important to tell our loved ones how we feel about them, what they mean to us and how they have impacted on our lives. Great write I really enjoyed it!
That is such an amazing poem with such a heartfelt meaning*** I read this poem and it showed me to tell my best friend how im feeling, as shes going through a rough tym @ the mo, so thankz!!!!
That is worded so well and so beautiful and meaningful...
I believe you should tell your friends (and other loved ones) how much they mean to you, too...before it's too late...what a wonderful message, I would be proud of it too...very proud... and I just love the idea of Earth angels...they are all around, but sometimes no one notices really...or just don't say anything...
Awwww, Britt! It's beautiful. It's so sad. :( It brought tears to my eyes. It also made me realize that i should tell my friends how much they mean to me more often... This is an amazing poem and it was written by the most awesomest Britt in the world! :) I love you. Keep writing or i'll beat you up! Hehe *huggles*
OMG, Rolo!!!!!! I'm so glad that you recommended that I read this! you are an amazing poet! I really, really loved it! The flow was perfect and the rhymes were excellent!!!!! I'm adding you to my favorites!!!!! Great job!!!!