Distant as stars

by Poetic Tragedy08   Jun 16, 2005


*Note* I know it sound weird, but its been edited, so those words are not what's been really used.

Your love for me
Is about as distant as the stars
Which tends to leave
These deep black scars

Your heart is there
But not beating to me
Which tends to make
Me no longer see

I can't tell you
Just how freakin bad
That me without your love
Makes me so dang sad

Your love still burns
You still love me
You just don't know it
But one day you'll see

I know your gone and over
But I'm still deep
I try my hardest
But I'm still a creep

I'm in a nightmare
How did this happen now?
You slipped past me
I can't see how

Right past my eyes
Past my heart
Now I guess
I need a new start

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    very well written, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    This is AMAZING!! 5/5 LOVED IT! Great job!
    Keep it up you have a gift!!
    *BECKY*

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Thanx you guys! it means alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by Haleigh

    that was an amazing poem...truly touching... 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    that was a great poem, i guess we all go through times like that, keep up the great work!!