THE "finally worte something that I like"

by LAST RONIN   Jun 19, 2005


The Day
The Look
The smile
The number
The call
The date
The flowers
The smell
The touch
The warmth
The feeling
The night
The act
The sex
The love
The cuddle
The sleep
The years
The arguments
The fights
The cheating
The leaving
The tears
The pain
The loneliness
The emptiness
The blade
The cut
The blood
The End

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    really wonderful. a new interesting style.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW it tells a life story in just a few words!!! how smart!!!! i am seriously impressed!!

  • 18 years ago

    by None

    very interesting.....I like the style...I have never thought to just make something with "the" as every first line...

  • 18 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    (Feminem hater, but thanks for the compliment)
    I really like this poem, it was different really different, unique in a way.
    I liked the way it was presented amazing job.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked it because it was different! I have to say I haven't read anything quite like it! Good job! Take Care! Brooke~

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