My Savior

by Angie   Jun 20, 2005


I dream for wishes
I scream in pain
I call for the one
I cry thy name

The one to save me
From the one who killed me,
The one to heal me
From all my misery.

I'm cursed with a life, that seems so grand
Yet if you knew me, you'd understand,
It's all a charade, a simple game....

A plastered smile, upon my face
A laugh thats so utterly fake
A world thats full of pain
From which their is nothing to gain.

I dream for wishes
I scream in pain
I call for the one
I cry thy name.....My Savior.

*I know its not one of my bests again....but i worte this to take out some feeling from me.....Please comment and rate it would mean alot to moi...thanx!
© Angie K

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rose

    Great poem. I totally understand how you feel. Nice usage of "thy" very vintage, in a old shakespearin way...if that makes any sense lol. Nice work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    That was a very emotional poem. very good. i think everyone wants someone to come and save them. read my other poems and u will learn of one saviour. but im not here to preach. this poem had a really nice flow. the rhythm from one stanza to the other was perfect! keep up the good work.

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