It appears that this means a great deal to you, very close to your heart. As I was reading it the words "Red Rose" came to mind, maybe that's just me but it might help inspire a title for you. Very well done.

I am so sorry that you are so young and feel so much pain.. I am sorry I can't think of a title for your poem but I will come back to it later and read it again maybe something will come to me then.. great wirting..goose bumps ... 6.47 on my 6.66 scale...

hey EJ, I liked this poem. you express
your feelings wonderfully. if it was my
choice, I would name this poem
"so lost". you know I'm not very good
on choosing a title for poems.
much love, Marjan

wow....lol that's really powerful! nice flow...great job! 5/5

woah sad! it's written very well though!! awesome job! wow though.. deep!! 5/5!
love always,
Abcede:P

Wow, that poem was just amazing! I don't even know what to say. It said so many things that I feel and would love to say to someone, but I could never find the right words. You did, and they came out beautifully. Loved it.

Kalika

Very well written poem! Full of deep emotions and the flow was good too. Was worth the read! Take Care! Brooke~

Excellent poem, I would give my apologies for the hurt you have felt, but I know you don't want to hear them. After all, I don't even know you. I liked Jason Meres's title, "red rose". Beautiflu on the outside, but so crimson red and misunderstood. As for the poetic skill, very wel written, although I have to say there were a few spots you lost the "flow". Pverall, I gave you a 5. Take care.

:'( .. great write. it flowed well and everything was sooo clear!! awesome job
5/5..
peace,
abcede :)

This was amazing. The deepness of it is extraordinary!

You're right. This is your best. Well, of the ones I've read anyway.

This is a very, very, very, VERY good poem. I hope you turn out more like this, I would like to read them. (Not necessarily the way that sounded...I'm not telling you to cut or anything) Normally I despise cutting poems, but this one just meant so much more than the normal "I cut, I cry, I have no friends, I want to die, woe is me" crap.

wow...another great one... this one is even better than the last... i dont think anything needs to be changed....
keep this awesome stuff going...
if you could... read/rate/comment on my two latest poems...
thanks
much love
amanda

This poem had a great message! Alot of people should read this, because I don't think anyone should end their own life. Awesome poem! I loved it! Keep it up. Xx

if Iwouldnt have a thing agenst alcohol I wouldnt have gotten the last part! I love this poem, you have know Idea how much I can relate. Your brought tear to me eyes. wonderful write, powerful.

~Breeze

i feel what you mean. amazing poem.

I'm glad you at least don't want to end it...I wish you didn't feel the need to ease your pain with a different form of pain...but I guess you don't want me to say I'm sorry or tell you to stop cutting... You put your feelings out there and really let it all out...I like the ending, I agree... all the stuff before the drinking...that was sorta hard for me to take...it probably would've flowed better if I hadn't kept looking away and all....well good work......

xxx

although it seems kinda cluttered...ur poem shows alot of emotion...i like that..hehe..

I can really relte to this poem. loves it.

Lv A, x