Hesitation..

by Jenn   Jun 21, 2005


My heart grows cold
world goes numb
and my ears hum
as i sit staring wide eyed and dumb

as i sit the years fly by
soon i know my life as a lie
and i know i can't hide
from my mysery....

the day you walked away
my life has never been the same
instead of happiness i have shame
and tears came.....

my hope is gone
my love has faded
all because...i hesitated...
......to love you......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very good poem well versed as always. I like the way your poems, flow, at this time i would like to extend an invitation to my poetry club to you. It's called the Dark Poet Society. I think you fit the bill. your a talented writer and no one can ever take that away from you.

    Thank you as always for your comments and quotes, i am going to have a new poem, i think i am going to do some free association writing tonight, let me know what you think.

    Shaun.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    I can really relate to this one I had a guy and i never told him i loved him so he left me = ( and its been 3 years and im still waiting.... But anyways 5/5 Much Luv, Manda

  • 18 years ago

    by Lori

    that was a really good poem! good job!