by Jenn Jun 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Every time you hit a cord |
by Dark Savior
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Very good poem and i liked the way you put it, it was rather exciteful. I liked the way you carried it on as if it was your last dieing breath that you were trying to speak this to the person. Wonderfully done. I think that it is a very well done poem and i give it five/five. |
by Noelle k.
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another great poem by you. great job. cant wait to read more |