Comments : The Only Thing I'm Missing is U

  • 18 years ago

    by Piper

    wow long and sad really good 5/5 ``-``

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww that was so sweet and very creative and unique. I never read one like that before and I definately liked it. I was on the verge of crying. Excellent job.

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    its cute... very cute... good job, keep it coming
    much love
    Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    An amazing poem! Such a unique idea I loved it! Not silly be any means!

    "I will always visit her gravestone, once a year,
    Making my prayers, wishing this wasn't true,
    A white rose, a hand-written poem, a single tear,
    The Only Thing I'm Missing is You..."
    That is very sad it makes me want to cry! As always an exellent job! I haven't written anything new my mind just seems to be blank right now! Take Care! Brooke!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Salvation

    aww...its really cute, I like it alot...very creative...5/5...keep up the good poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Salvation

    aww...its really cute, I like it alot...very creative...5/5...keep up the good poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Sally

    cool...poem...hi

  • 18 years ago

    by xCezx

    wow! love it, im lost for words. great idea, great poem, everythings great! lv ya cez xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    very well written .. very diffrent.. I liked reading it and felt the sadness at the end.. 6.39 on my scale 6.66

  • 18 years ago

    by Megin

    omg i love that poem so much!! i didnt even notice the u wasnt there tell the end!! it is really really good though..it had me about to cry!! keep it up..xoxo meg'n

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Wow good idea Kandice, I'll change that, never thought about that lol. Thanks for the comments people.

  • 18 years ago

    by Insane Inside And Out

    Wow. It's sweet and sad. Good job! Keep up the writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    *crying* omg! that is so good...really keep it up!
    luvs,
    Ashli

  • 18 years ago

    by BEAUTiFUL JESiCA

    NAW WUTEVA THIS POEM IS NOT A 5!!! THIS IS POEM IS A PERFECT 10!!

  • Aww That Was So Cute, Usualy I Don't Like Love Poems But This One Caught My Eye And My Heart 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by NicholeNymphetamine

    Ur poem was soo sweet... it seemed to have some emotion in it... check out my stuff sumtime

    xoxo,
    \x/Nikki-Marie\x/

  • 18 years ago

    by ~iTdOnTmAtTeR823~

    i know im kinda late in writing this but omg....wen i was reading it i thought it was so cute with the alphabets, then i read the message you wrote and i realized the U part, awwwwwwwwww...i almost cried ryt there...lol...so sad grt writing...til next time
    ~Peace N' Godbless~

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    omg this is freakin awesome...its soo creative and sad very good job 5/5! <3

  • 18 years ago

    by [crimson] tearz_fall

    OMG I read this and almost cried! This is so sweet, and sad, and so very cleaver! I LOVE IT!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by [crimson] tearz_fall

    THIS IS SUPER DUPER