:) thanks.

Hey Ashley... You are amazing! Your poetry makes my work look like crap! You are so talented, so keep writing! I love your work, and I can't wait to read more from you! I'm so sorry that your dad left you with a heart full of pain. That's not right. But just remember that he is missing out on watching his wonderful daughter grow up and go places. That's his loss... Not yours... I know it seems stupid, and that it doesn't matter whether it was his choice or not, because you wish you could have a dad that would be there for ya... But its the truth... We cannot control everyone's actions... But stay strong...

thank you so much :) i'm begining to feel a little better today.

Ashley, that is so sad!! but is extremely well written!!! great job! i love your style and real-life themes!! awesome!

maybe you could check out some of mine!?

oh wow, that was great. just excellent

That's soo sad.

I did'nt have a dad growing up. But this touched me all the same.

Well done, seemed awkward in a few places but nothing detracting at all. I like it.

awww that was cute well luv ya byebye

oh, this is so good. I'm going to put
you in my favorites right now. you
write beautifully. keep it up.
take care, Marjan

OMG that's so sad. I am so sorry! I feel for you because I was a daddys girl. I didn't have a good relationship with my mom though! We still have our problems from time to time! You're an amazing writer I noticed your age. You have such potential! Take Care! Brooke~

it was ok stick to one format its easier to read tht way

excellent poem hun...I can really relate to this poem alot...I really wish i can be closer with my dad sometimes but I know it would never happen. good job. take care xxx

i really like this poem, keep it up

i'm my Daddys little girl to.

oh wow, that was great. just excellent

my beother did'nt have a dad growing up. But this touched me all the same.

great poem i must say. keep it up. very touching

WOW WOW WOW!! You have no idea how badly I hate hearing that people feel this way..It really makes me sick..I mean I am so sorry..No girl..or boy at that matter..should have to feel that pain...I am so sorry I just wish I could take it away somehow..hey..would sharing my dad help? haha just kidding...but you hang in there and sooner or later you'll find you made it without him because you are strong! Wonderful write!
~Chelsey~

WOW! This is really good! It flowed great. I'm gonna add you to my favorties! You got a lot of talent!
Love always,
haily
xoxoxoxoxoxo

wow i like this one too the rhym scheme ws great.....wonderful job 5/5

i like the emotion put into this poem, nice job, keep it up :)