The Story

by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ   Jun 24, 2005


I wrote a story,
on my skin,
It had a beginning,
a middle and end.
It started out slowly,
shallow and short,
but then it progressed,
to nothing of the sort.
It became long,
and deep with feeling,
like a beautiful song,
with such a great meaning.
It's printed forever,
and will never leave.
although it's covered,
with my sleeve.
But for anyone,
who's depth would like to explore,
the stories just begun,
so you can come back for more.

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  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    I know you've commented on my stuff before, but I would just really like to say that this was a very very good poem. I love how you depicted the idea of a cut into a story, because that's exactly what they are. Stories about the pain in your life. I really enjoyed this poem. 5/5 for sure

  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    aaawww great poem! i like it! 25/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by abcede

    woah! deeeeep poem! i love it and i LOVED the point-of-view.. it was so different from the other overused writings on cutting, because you gave it such originality and character!! great job!! you got a 5 from me
    love always,
    Abcede! >,<

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    of course take a 5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    wow that was really really good.. bravo!! excellent.. great job.. bye bye EJ

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