Relief

by elizabeth   Jun 25, 2005


Raging emotions
Anger
Uncontrollable wrath
Mental torment
Sadness
Eternal grief
Incurable rage

Glistening metal
Smooth yet sharp
Against the skin
Cutting, slashing, tearing
Scarring tears
Physical pain
Emotional release

Relief

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  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome, very well written & nice word choice... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    speechless

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel

    Great poem. This poem has great sensory detail and figurative language. You're so descriptive in your writing . Good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    hewwo (hello) it's me.....gr8 poem 5/5 i luv yor style gurl alwayz will.....thanx 4 readin n commenting on my poem it meant so much to me......thanx 4 bein a good friend. Well ttyl, Peace Hun, Much Luv Always, //ari\\

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