A Girl out of place..

by Charlotte   Jun 25, 2005


* I DID NOT WRITE ANY OF THIS!! It was in the forum as like an add-a-line poem and I thought that it was brilliant so I fixed it up and now here it is!! Thank you to all who contributed to this!!

Her Fragile Soul Diminished
Detached And Out Of Place
Its Like An Angels Cry
When Death Shall Seek Embrace

The words shatter her soul,
Fragile as glass,
The girl wasn't strong enough,
to fight the demons, and to last

they smiled as they destroyed her,
and riped her limb from limb,
drinking the blood from her wounds,
in ecstasy their mind swims.

the blood surrounding them,
and their shallow guilt,
slowly she,
begins to wilt

slipping deeper and deeper,
they watch her bid farewell,
no one knows of her existence now,
not like they're gonna tell.

But what the hell.
Things don't matter now
and she knows just what to do
there's money in her pocket

but nothing in the world to buy,
she doesn't need food or clothes
she just needs to die.

she want her life to end
no more pain
no more heartbreak
no more tears
she wants it to end

and so she cuts her throat..

Though it's only a minor cut
but a cut is a cut and
the next thing she does is
join Poetry and Quotes

she writes in some forums,
happy she starts to feel,
no more cuts does she make,
and the old ones begin to heal...

But then the gladness
from her heart turns
to madness, when she clicks
0n a forum called
depression and sadness.

she explains all her feelings,
and why she doesn't want to live,
but another fight starts,
and no advice do they(other people) give.

loves the thought of punishing them,
they deserve to watch her die.
this is all there doing,
but they do not know why.

she gathers them all together.
what a party it will be!
They stand round for their surprise,
but she lets go, and is free.

The trigger she pulls back
And everyone starts to scream
Happy at last
Because she gave them a blast

she was laid to rest
amongst the best.
she was strong, she was brave,
she chose to go to her grave.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lynz

    How much did you add to it?