Tired

by Lecrissa   Jun 25, 2005


I sit here in the evening dusk
Waiting for I don't know what
I am not lost
But I am not found
I find myself daily lousing ground
I see life passing me by
The cars
The trucks
The planes in the sky
I work all day
And I work all night
There is very little time to dream
Or let my imagination take flight

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    again, very good poem...keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    omg i love ur work! its soo amazing. i give you 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    It was very short, not a certain structure, free verse i guess. It was okay, the rhyming was good. I think it would have been alot better if there were more lines. It had meaning. good job

    Love Alwayz,
    Katie Schettler

  • 18 years ago

    by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ

    That was really good. It was like, it's own little styly, and I liked that. Good job

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    hello! i thought this was good, about life just passing on through almost like it's without you.....gave me kind of a lonely feeling but.....5/5 Take Care and Peace! //ari\\

    p.s.-there was just one spelling mistake: plains=planes.

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