Inhale

by Lenee.Roca   Jun 26, 2005


Inhale
...this very second
i look into your eyes
i see my reflection
a love that can't hide.
...this very second
i hear the words you say
that will bring me
tomorrow
i know I'll find my way.
...this very second
your smile disappeared
my heart skipped a beat
as you told me the news.
...this very second
your arms let me go
i can't feel your touch
i have nothing to hold.
...this very second
i realize your going to be somewhere else
away from me
i lost my breathe.
...this very second
i learned about heart breaks
my life changed forever
all it took was one breath.
exhale

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  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I loved it!!! very heartfelt!! thanx for your comment i really appreciated it thanx!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    This poem really leaves you wondering what the news was, and I liked the pattern. Great write, 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    damn... thats good... one of the best ive read... i like your depth... check out some of my poems... keep the good writting comin...
    -sk8er101-

  • 18 years ago

    by tayler

    i really like dthis poem it was somehow ( i cant think of the word) "deep" i really liked how the words "htis very second" drew the reader into the poem and made them want to read more i really like ur work its very touching and sad! but i like it! most of my poems are about my life experiences with different things like guys, friends, death, people in general but urs are about sadness and death and it somehow makes me enjoy them!

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