how u see bout true love, i like it... but it should comes with rhyme (my opinion) coz i like poem with rhyme and i think if u can make this with rhymes should sound nice ^^ anyway i still like it

i'm glad you like it. i'll work on that rhyming...who knows...i don't know about this one, but i was planning to work on it more...trying to continue with it.

xxx

Very well written this is my favorite of yours so far. I really think you ended it perfectly! Loved the poem! Take Care~! Brooke

Very well said, as all of your poems are. I have had the great priveledge of counting myself as blessed.

Aww this poem is so cute and sweet! I wud love that if i guy looked at me that way!

this poem touched my heart
keep it up

wow... this was amazing! truly beautiful...

I agree with everyone else, it is really beautiful and just.. wow..! You really have a great talent for writing, and I can already see that just from the few poems I've read from you already. Keep writing, 5/5!

-Anth

Hey gurl.. its brit here hehe...
well wow i loved that poem im goin to go read more of them *by you ofcourse hehe* keep on keepin on (as my grandadie used to tell me lol)

this poem made me feel happy. 5/5

I really like this one, especially because I can relate...I looked at someone like ths once......but it ended long ago...

I loved this poem! I realize now that I love my boyfriend, because he appreciates me, and I love that. Now I know that I really do love him, and that he feels the same about me! Your such a good writer, keep up the beautiful work! xX

its awesome loved it
keep up ur wonderful work~
much love
amanda

wow, this is a beautiful poem.. you have a way with words :) 5/5

Beautifull! :) So true as well, when you have a girlfriend/boyfriend, everything else seems irrelevant.. Your opposite becomes the main priority :) Extremely good poem, well written! Kind regards from kane x

great poem once again. (*yawns loudly* I think I slept for 3 days since I last posted on of your poems, don't worry, I didn't fall asleep during on of your poems, I went to sleep) *sighs* another feel great poem written by a great writer. I don't want to sound clich'e but "keep up the good work!" ^_^x

Poetry is about choice, not quality, of words. You could have sat up 5 nights fixing every word through a theasurus, but you didn't. Unlike most poems, its just raw emotion, the kind that makes a best poem. What I liked about this poem is that it showed me what its like to have what I never will, in such a simple form. Thanks for letting me have this experience...

-- Shado Stalker

Good poem, i liked the poem, hated the topic. *no offense* i think that it is a wonderfully done poem, i liked the different style it was written in. I think it is a good poem, just that true love doesn't exist, or love in general doesn't exist.

I think that it is something like a fairytale..often heard but never seen or felt.

nice poemxx

I liked it. <3 well written. 5/5