A response to Krissta's Poem Call: I'm Not Ready

by Josiah Larson   Jun 27, 2005


If you want to understand this poem a little bit please read her poem first
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/misc/poems.php?id=387096
or you can just read this one first then hers it may make sence, I just love her thats all... ;)
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Honey, as you know I am 17
You may not be ready
for what I want
and yes there is 3 years between us
but ask your self this
what are you ready for
I know you may think your a child
I know you have your whole life ahead
But let me be right beside you
let me take each step with you
and spend every second with you
lets not let any second go to waste

I don't want to be a daddy
and I know you would agree
I understand people make mistakes
but thats a risk they have to take

I am sorry I am so old
but you said you loved me
I hope you know the love I behold
please don't be angry
don't be mad
All I want is for you be glad

I am sorry for what has happen
and I wish I could take it all back
please comeback or maybe callback

I hope at the end
we can still be friends
I didn't intend
to hurt you
I don't want to argue

The thing I am trying to say
and what I think about every day
that happen in may

is that you don't know what you had
until you lost it
I just wanted to add

To what you had to say
that hurt me so much
I hope that we can retouch
and you would understand
of what you had
and what you lost

I can't withstand
not holding your hand
I hope that you can expand
your feelings you once had
and you would see
what you feel is real

I know deep down
you love me
and we could be
only if you let us be

so before I go
I hope you can feel my sorrow
and that you would follow
what your heart has to say

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  • 17 years ago

    by kayt

    Wow jebasiah this is a good one i really wish it would've worked out for you two it sux being friends with both of you because it is so hard ot do because i love you both but shh dont tell krissta i love you the most you like a big bro to me so yeah love you buhs

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Thx,

    I tend to write freehand, and dont bother.

    Thanks for the comment

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hiya,
    have read both poems, Krissta's and yours, have commented on both.
    I guess the poems do need a cleanup (puntuation...etc) but I love the feeling I get from reading this, knowing that there are nice guys out there that will always stand by someone.

    I hope it all works out for both of yous!
    Laterz,
    Shirlz.

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!
    That's all I can say.. It's excellent.
    5/5 and I would give more if I could.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    OMG........................... im so shocked... to the point that someone could have just shot me... when i read this it was like deja vu. I read her poem as well, and holy ... i met the love of my life on this poetry site... hes older than me, but its working out. He lives far away, but we're going to be together, he would do anything for me, and i would climb a mountain for him. I seems so weird that i found my one true love in life, on this site... its incredibe, we have more love than, magic... its perfection... you too, will find that someday, i hope it can work out with this girl. But if not, then just remember everything happens for a reason, i met my guy for a reason, i like to call fate. you will meet yours too, Much love,

    Ana*