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by midnight♥lullibys   Jun 28, 2005


When you hold me
every thing's right.
I'll let my feelings free...
just hold me tight.

I promise that I'll be
to you completely loyal
like you've been to me,
and let love take control.

It's like you were sent
to help me get by.
Together we were meant,
just one girl and one guy..

Of course no one's perfect,
but i hope you can see;
you're as close as one can get.
especially to me.

-.'.-please please rate/comment i would really much appreciate it...and I'll do the same for you-.'.-

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  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I liked the poem...The way you expressed how even though no one's perfect, he feels perfect to you. I heard somewhere that love isn't perfection, it's seeing the other's imperfections PERFECTLY...=)

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Very nicely written poem.
    It flowed well and i liked your choice of words.

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i really liked this one. cute and sweet. Very short in a way but an amazing job once again. your very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good and a very sweet poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Awwwwwwwww this is great..just what i feel for my baby...5/5...u r a terrific writer

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