oh it flowed so well and it was so cute!! great job! i gave ya a 5!!
peace,
Abcede

~maybe you can check out some of my poems?!~ :)

AWESOMENESS! haha..that's was good. AMAZING=).
rocking out--loser1

I thought that this stanza:

it's like you were sent
to help me get by.
together we were meant,
just one girl and one guy

was really cute. Alright job on the poem. Keep writing.

P.S I love the picture in your profile

nice poem! keep it up!

Erica ur such a sweetheart i love the poem read mine!! muah!

ps this is kristen lenox!!!!

this is really gorgeous, keep writing!

great job on the poem
keep it up
April`

great love poem 5/5

Excellent poem, i liked the third stanza. take care

Thats sooo awesome!! I loved the last part of it, you did it just perfectly!! I loved it!!5/5

ERICA READ MY POEM THERE SUICIDE IF YOU ALREADY DIDN'T!! THANKS...
*BECKY*

this was short and touching. i loved it!

Very sweet, and beautifully done.

wow, I really enjoyed reading this one.
it's so great. and It has a good flow.
love you,
marjan

"just hole me tight."
did you mean "hold"?
great poem though! thanks for commenting on mine!
~Christina

i also really liked this poem. your a very good writer

aw this was a cute poem

Absolutely beautiful! So full of love! Short but you said so much! Very well written! Really liked this one! Can't find anything to criticize! Take Care! Brooke~

aww that was beautiful. short and sweet. the ending gave it a powerful impact. Good job. xxx