Even the dead still cry

by myxlittlexcut   Jun 28, 2005


These tears wont stop
that are streaming down her face
they are hidden behind a veil
of midnight black lace

the shadows had consumed her
her heart felt too lost to ever be found
the crimson currents were set free to flow
life drained out without a sound

she stained her surroundings
with all her pain and hate
taking her life with a cut too deep
was her current fate

but who could have known
that even the dead still cry
after taking her life that night
her tormented soul still wont die

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  • 18 years ago

    by Valentin

    Deep.. and i love it

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, this one is truly amazing xxx

  • Hey, i really like this, it's deep, people think that when they die all their pain will be over, but in truth it carries on.
    Great poem, well done.

    Thanks for commenting on my poems, i really appreciate it.

    <3 Charli XxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    uh-huh...i agree the dead are still alive...they still cry
    5/5 nicely done

    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow, i loved that. great poem!

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