great choice of words....very hopefull good job 5/5

^.^ yay! once again, lovely! i totally wish i had the strength to do something like that. I really loved the last line, it was the one i related to the most. "I need to start again
Rebuild from the ground
Destroy this damn curse
That always has me bound"
I love how you put things into words. you're soo great!

Very smooth, and fits with me well as you can probably guess. Well done.

wow, I really loved this one. It has a good flow. You're really talented.
thanks for commenting on my poem.
take care, marjan

NICE POWERFUL POEM I LIKED IT THANX FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM

I hope that you are able to rebuild. It does take a lot of time and patience though. Great piece.

good write its always good to return back to the start good write 5/5

great use of rhyme! this is an excellent poem! >>5/5<<
*bec* xXx

I like the postive ending.. good work

I like the postive ending.. good work

I really admire this one. I found a lot of my own thoughts entwined within your stanzas. Really great job on this one.

very nice...I really like this one....

"Being depressed is just dumb" - right...if only it was that easy...

Lovely flow... :)

xxx

love the flow.. love the words... and ur on my favorites.. thanks for ur comments... ur sure to get them back..

NK

sad poem but i like it! 25/5 excellect poem! =)

Hey, This poem is great! Seems deep, well written, good flow and gerat topic! I hope you put more of your writings on the site!

LUCKy
~HazE