Daddys little girl

by ©TheCornerOfTheEnd   Jun 30, 2005


I never got to b daddy’s little girl,
I never got to be his shining pearl,
I only wanted to see him for one day,
But my mother said he had to pay
I tried to find him
I really did
Just to see if he had any kids,
And to if he wanted to love me
That’s all I wanted is some love
Not the wooded love I once had had

The real love
Which he would give me a hug
If I was up set
Or done some thing I really regret

I really do envy those adverts
Which show the family with out the hurts

So if anyone Knows him please come forward
He is Ian Tiddball please come forward

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  • 17 years ago

    by samantha

    I know how you feel i dont even know my father and im almost 18. so keep your head up and someday he'll find you!

  • 18 years ago

    by yhn17

    When a great artist writes a poem, i dont believe he/she is trying to rythm or make it sound amazing...just writing what comes from the heart...rather then connecting the pen to the page, a great artist connects their heart to words...so it doesnt matter if you have mistakes or not...
    great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by **baby_girl**

    that is gr8 babe say hey 2 verity 4 me u write well gd stuff love ya x-x-x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    whats with the numbers. words are a lot more affective. some of your lines didn't make sense. try to correct those and get rid of the numbers and you have yourself a great poem.
    ~*Freak*~

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