this is really good...5/5

hey , Is is a really good poem Great job .
5/5
April`

Very well done poetically and in conveyance...told the tale flawlessly.

aohww!! that's soo cute!! i love it great job, great flow! keep it up and NEVER stop writing!!
love always,
Abcede ^,^

Its good, but you go out of your way to make a ryhme, RYHME IS NOT THE MOST IMPORTANT THING TO POETRY! there are other ways to make it flow...
But i do like it and can compleatly realate to it... my bf left me after two months my freshman year, and he joined the Navey! i was so mad that i didnt get to tell him how i felt. but i got over it. (check ouy my poem, you'll understand)

Full of deep emotions! "But I liked your shampoo" this is the only line I didn't like I think the rhyme was forced. Other than that you did an amazing job! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

I agree with Brooke about the shampoo line. very nice.

Really great, thanx for your comment on mine. It is appreciated more than you know. Keep up the good work.
~Tormented~

Awsome poem i totally no wat u mean...u never relise wat you got until it's gone......i voted 5....Plz check out my new poem 'Never Been Kissed' it would mean the world 2 me

aw thats sad...very sweet....i gave it a 4...dunno it lacked somthing...but it was good

i like this poem.. the part where it says.. but i liked your shampoo kinda made me laugh! it was funny!! great job
love always,
abcede

hey emilia, this is so wonderful.
you express your feelings very well.
love you,
marjan

this was a good poem

Arn't you miss vicious?!? If you aren't than sorry for the mix up but I think you are. You have some very familier poems. Well anyways. Loved the poem. I'm a fan of lost love poems. Good job. kilman = David B.

this is really powerful. The last line, for some unknown reason, just blows me away. well done!

excellent and strong poem! Good job! <3

Beautifully written! i loved it!! I can relate sooooo well! keep it up! i enjoyed it! 5/5

Really good poem. Very emotional. Keep it up!!! :D

i agree with Breeze about the whole making it flow thing. I liked the idea of the poem and i can relate to it so you did a good job with that. Keep on writing.

ttyl,
Maddy

great poem.