Dancing with the rain

by stephalee   Jul 1, 2005


Drip drop
I hear the pitter patter of rain drops
Dancing on the roof
It beckons me
Come out and play
Its says to me
Come out and dance dreamily
Out in the rain
Drip drop
It sings me a song
Writes me a poem
Dances a dance
Tells me a story
How I long to feel the freedom
Of the warm summer rain
Dripping down the back of my neck
The longing of running outside
Freedom from the hatred inside
I can resist no longer
I make a mad dash for the door
I am free in the arms of the wind
Dancing with the rain
Finally I am free
Dancing with the rain

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    WOW. This poem is sooo cool! It's expressive, imaginitive and just so cool! 5/5 alll the way baby! Booyah! I especially liked the sentence: 'I am free in the arms of the wind.' It ha d areally nice touch to the whole poem by having that sentence in it. Lovely work, keep it up! ^_^

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Excellent Imagery.

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    Hugs N Kisses.

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