Aah this one sucks!

by Brianne   Jul 2, 2005


Our love was grand
Our love was strong
but for some reason
you thought it was wrong

You broke my heart
And set it free
but there is something
you just don't see

These things are feelings
and these feelings hurt
they hurt because you
left my heart in dirt

how can you be so heartless
how can you not even care
don't you sometimes have that feeling
where you wish that i was there?

i have those feelings all the time
morning noon and night
i really just wish that you could see
that i am not all right

yeah, i know, this sounds really unfinished, and thats because it is. i fell asleep while writing this and i couldn't think of anything else to write! so it'll just have to stay this way for now :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    hey i have a few of unfinished poems too its cool how we both write at night i guess its cause we miss our honeys at night
    Love Bridgette I hope u dont think i am retarded oh well at least u know the real mee cause im just bein myself

  • 18 years ago

    by Mike

    Hey, you write like me now : P
    Its nice to write like this, all the poems seem to flow perfectly, atleast to me. Great job! 5/5 :P

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