Hands + Revenge = Death

by undying blusher   Jul 3, 2005


Hands & Death

He takes her hand
Knocks her against the wall
Points a gun
She's still struggling
He's looking to return the pain
She gave him
If he can't have her
She'll have no one
One last kiss
[Filled with angry passion and yet..]
And he didn't miss
He didn't miss
She screamed in horror and pain
Then silently slid down the wall
Leaving a trail of evidence behind
He cries
"What have I done?"

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  • 18 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    good work girl.. I can see it as it happens..

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    wow...I love the way you wrote it...very mysterious and fresh. I've never seen a poem like it. good job!

    take care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    thank you.