Daddy Did it(improved)

by Seth   Jul 3, 2005


She didn't Mean to Get daddy Mad that night.

She curled in a ball while she Listened to Mommy and Daddy Fight.

Words were Given, Words Were taken. The words she Heard She knew were Forsaken.

She cried and cried while she was lying Helplessly On the Floor.

She grew Quite Scared when she heard mommy storm out the Door.

For now she prayed hoping god would hear Her call.

While she Grew more and more tense hearing Daddy's Footsteps Down The hall.

Her Mind Running Fastly Thinking Of What She Would Say As She Quietly Sobbed.

But she Quickly Fell Silent when she heard daddy Turning Her Doorknob.

She Suddenly Panicked And crawled under her Bed to Hide.

But Daddy Wasn't Stupid, As he Pushed her Bed Aside.

She begged her daddy to hear Her 1 plea. But she knew her daddy already felt she was Guilty.

She was all Too Beautiful With her Glowing Eyes So Brown.

But Daddy Didn't care while his Fists continued to Come down.

She cuddled in the corner Praying That His Fists would Subside.

As she wished she found a much better place to Hide.

Daddy Suddenly Stopped And Hurried To His car.

For this time Daddy knew He Went a Little too far.

She laid there Motionless Her Face Glowing Red.

This was the night That Daddy Beat her Dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    That is ssoo sad, man why am I reading only the sad poems? I guess the interesting titles are the ones that are sad but yea really good poem, just like the rest. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Not my type of poem to be honest...the subject was too "cliche" for me.
    Also, what was the reason behind the random capital and lower case letters, it was confusing and did nothing for the poem.
    It flowed ok, and although the rhyme was basic it worked.
    Rather then describing her eyes as "brown" a bit of a more creative approach would have been nice. I know it's difficult to descripbe eyes though, I've just written a full poem about blue eyes.
    Overall, could still use a bit of work (creative language and grammar correction) but thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Iii have nothing to say omg that was the most sadest thing that i have EVER read whoaaa!!! awesome poem keep it up ur the best writer i've ever seen!

  • really great poem, i really liked it alot
    harley

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    seth...that made me cry..thanx alot..jk
    i loved it! keep it up! you have alot of talent!
    LOVE:heather