U had ur chance.

by x~broken~angel~x   Jul 3, 2005


When you found out what i did
why didn't you tell me to stop?
is it that you don't care
whether i stand or drop?

Maybe its because you don't
know what to say..
but still show me that you care
that i am this way!

when i want to talk
you change the subject most times
that does kind of hurt me
and pushes my emotions above the line

sometimes you show me you care
and i love the feeling when you do
because i actually feel loved
and i really love you!

but you had Ur chance to stop me
but you didn't take any notice of it
and at the moment i feel horrible
like I'm not loved one bit.

i take the nice sharp knife
and press the cold blade against my wrist
i put a bit of pressure on it
then give it a good twist.

i feel the fantastic pain
and see all the blood on the floor
then i feel a bit dizzy
there is a knock at the door.

Go AWAY! i scream
but the door slowly opens a bit
you stop and watch me pass out
and scream oh y did u do it??

u had you're chance to save me
but u pushed the chance away
that is why i took my life
and died in front of you that day.

~please comment!~

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  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    I loved this poem..its my favourite..mainly becus i can relate to feelings u have felt...i use ti a bit of a slicer as well.but hopefuly im past that stage....with some help from my bf:D
    tk care...keep up the gud work bree

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    really good...but i'd like to know what it;'s about!! really intriguing and deep. take care x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkPrincessLozxXx

    i loves this poem so much!! it has such a good ending
    love lozzzz
    xoxoxox

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