Flying to California

by Taylor   Jul 5, 2005


Flying to California
Away from my home town
Flying to California
Where my troubles aren't around

I'm getting a break from the drama
And the problems in my life
I'm taking a vacation
From my worries and the knife

My stalker can't stalk me
MY boyfriend can't call
My best friend can't hate me
That last the best of all

I know it sounds confusing
But everything is true
No one can keep me form my trip
Not even the almighty...you

My parents say it's good
That I take a break from home
I need some open spaces
Spaces to think and roam

Maybe when I get back
I'll have a master plan
I will not cut any more
And I'll have a real good tan!

Flying to California
Away from my home town
Flying to California
Where my troubles aren't around

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  • 15 years ago

    by ragrag

    Wow, I love your poem and I really felt the same before going to California

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow...that is exactly what I've been wanting to do for the longest time. Just get away from everything that is bothersome and take a long vacation far away. Sounds perfect....doesn't it? Is all of that really true? If so then I think that you need the vacation more than I do. I loved the idea of getting away in this one. We seem to have some similarities. 5/5 I'm starting to get frustrated because if I give you something any lower than a five, I will be lying to myself cause that is not what you deserve and that will bother me. Woah....kind of confused myself there. I hope I make more sense to you than I do myself...lol.

    TAKE CARE-
    stargazer38

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Wow, that was another awesome poem! Good job. Did your trip help you out? I agree - it's good to get away from everything once in a while. Good luck with things and take care.
    > Kiesha

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