Great poem..!! loved it.. 5/5!

Very well written! flowed nicely and really understood your emotions! great job! 5/5

meaningful. <3 5/5 -- I liked it... I could feel you throgh-out the poem. <3

Nicly done.

wow this poem was realllyyy good. it was kinda cofusing but i liked the words you choose...

OOohh..very enjoyable, and somewhat I dont know..Mysterious? Meaningful?...different all together. I loved it. xxx

Hey it's different to all your other poems but i do like it alot! I am in Australia at the moment staying with my best friend Jade for 6 weeks. She is the best and i am alot happier now. Anyways must go on :)

Hey it's different to all your other poems but i do like it alot! I am in Australia at the moment staying with my best friend Jade for 6 weeks. She is the best and i am alot happier now. Anyways must go on :)

waoh thats really good...very deep....great job 5/5

amazingly written, also thank you for giving me feedback on my writing, i appreciate it..

wonderful, ingenious, and fascinating.

amazing write.

Wow this had a totally different approach, really liked it, was very intense.

written beautifully...really love this one...

thank you for the comment. :)

xxx

awesome poem, i loved it 5/5. keep writing.

nice job! keep it up!

I loved the way you worte this poem.
it's wonderful and so sad.
love you,
marjan

I love the way you ask questions, I never think to but question marks in my poems, but I like it for some reason... looking forward to reading more<3 Sherrie

"Must wait out dreads weight,"
weight is a noun, so I think you meant "dread's" to indicate ownership
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"CEACE RAIN! I can’t…ask…again."
'CEASE' not 'CEACE'
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I really really enjoyed this poem. it's stream-of-consciousness prose and repitition definitely made me feel like I was going crazy while I was reading it.