No More

by Lecrissa   Jul 5, 2005


As I lay my head down to sleep
My thoughts fly
My dreams trying to set me free

There is no more worrying
About something to eat
No more worrying
About the next time I will get beat
There is no more cold
No more of my body being sold
No more crying
No more pain
No more thunder
No more rain

I dream of heaven
The lords domain

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  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This was an intresting poem.. n i liked it very much. ur poems have alot of potential. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I like the structure, and the repetition helps it to flow.

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Thanx for the comments =] I really like this poem, It's short but sweet.

    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    absolutely wondedrful.. the way u kept it short gave it meaning.. no more.. i enjoyed it..
    No more crying
    No more pain
    No more thunder
    No more rain

    i loved this part.. ur gr8
    take care
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    I think you should add some more poems to your featured list cause they are all so good!!!

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