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~*Freak*~

hey steve i love ur poem. u must really love that girl. well the poem is awesome keep writin ur really good. i love it when i see a guy sharing his feelings like that.

Beautiful! Love love love it...heartfelt...and you made it unique. it's like a pretty picture...lol. sorry.

xxx

good job, i enjoyed iths alot

Ok that almost made me cry! That is probably one of the sweetest things I have ever read

Wow! i really liked this poem! i can tell that your words are true and pure... you did an excellent job writing this! nice job and keep it up!

sammie

I loved this poem, it's so sweet and beautifully written. I loved the descriptions about her smile, her eyes...

I loved these lines:

its so beautiful yet at the same time bad
that anyone has a heart to make them eyes look so sad

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Beautiful. painted a picture in my mind! keep it up! Once again, another WONDERFUL love poem that somebady wants me to read! 5/5

That anyone has a heart to make them eyes look so sad
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The 'them' Should be 'those'

But, other then that, i loved this poem. it was very sweet. I haven't seen a poem written this way about eyes before. But this one was truly amazing!

That anyone has a heart to make them eyes look so sad
((Those not them..))

This is a very beautiful poem. But, may I suggest: Use punctuation. It'll improve the flow of the poem tremendously. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Nice use of words, great flow, i really enjoyed reading this

Well i can definitely see why this poem has been rated a 5 by 22 people!! amazing!! i loved the way you started off the poem, you really hooked me into it. i think the beginning was the strongest part of the poem, definitely my favorite part! you really are a talented writer, you know how to hit a girl's heart! i know my b/f has said things like that to me before and wiped away my tears, and let me tell you there is nothing that i like more than when he wipes away my tears and makes me laugh instead. great job again! 5/5

Yet another wonderful poem by you.
Again, I loved everything about it, it was truly beautiful.

Its beautiful! im gonna qoute my sis - dit raak mos nou my hart se snare! translated - it touched my heart! good work!

Haha lol i suppose i lyk 2 keep my readers in suspense about wot i'm writing about...but u can sorta guess lyk u said.

this poem is simply beautiful...i wonder if there was a special sum1 in mind when writing it or if it was just pure imagination. 5/5

Wonderfully done! ^^

Beautifully written... thanks for reading my poems it's greatly apprietiated it... :-) I'll be reading more of yours for sure!

What an amazing poem def got my 5 vote the wording you hav used is brilliant and u have it flowing perfectly x

I love this... it's very touching. Overall it's a wonderful wirte. 5/5

marcella

I like that poem. Its really good. :)