the poems sounds really good. mad props for that.

sweet and honest. i think you may be able to expand a bit...but it's beautiful.

xxx

Very well written! My only advice is I think I would add just a little more to it. Maybe add another stanza with a powerful ending. Just a thought! I thought the flow was great and all in all a good poem! Take Care! Brooke~

it has a ring to it

Loved this poem. It's the first poem i've read that gives both sides. The pros and cons...lol.

Great poem

~*~Christina~*~

I think you could keep going with this one. Although it is was well written and extremely sweet I feel like there could be more.

I'm sure many people will be able to relate to this. That's a tough situation.

Nice write....:) 5/5

its krazy, but im going thru those same feelings rite now! lol great job!

great job, it almost sounds like a song! lol. but the last two lines seemed to not belong for some reason, maybe its jstu me. good job though

This was so cute. I can relate. xX stay strong

aw! i can defineitely understand this poem a lot.

i can definatly relate to this poem :) 5/5

well written! I think it's a good length; doesn't ramble. You get the right amount of emotion across too. Good work
sarahxxx

That was short...but awesome 5/5

wow, Great poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.
~ItalianStallion~

This was a great poem and I agree with most the other people. It's a start. I've read your others and you could do better than a two stanza poem! Maybe just one more stanza, but, this is a great story and it deserves to be told, not hinted at! You know I love your poetry so, don't think I'm being mean! :o)