Let It Drip

by Renee   Jul 8, 2005


The candle wax from the ceiling of my mind
trickles down the walls
to remind me just how much this heart is hurting.
And how the blood dripping from your wedding ring,
after you ripped my heart out,
was dripping on my face
and dissolved into my saline tears.

But you didn't wipe them away this time.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    O....that is sad. When you get used to having that one person there to wipe your tears away....and then they don't wipe them anymore.....

    I know how you feel.

    Love it

    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very unique! It could almost go under dark poems! A lot said in just a few words. Very powerful but you expressed yourself in a creative way! Good write! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    i like it. seems sorta eerie...i don't know the word to describe it though...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    wow great use of words, good job. keep writing.

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