Darkness Falls

by Brian n Josh   Jul 8, 2005


The sky was filled with smoke, a dense black
All around was noise, bursts of thunder
My mind was a mess, hardly intact
What just happened, I could only wonder

The air was still ringing from the shot
Never stopped crying since I saw him fall
His life poured out, anguished not
Sirens in the distance, someone had made the call

His life flashed before my eyes
All those memories lost with his smile
Too much pain when someone dies
What I would give again, to see him for awhile

All these casualties left my laughter on my tongue
Why does darkness always fall, when we are so young?

by brian

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  • 18 years ago

    by x bRoKeN xx dReAmS x

    Hey,thanks for the comment on my poem,this is a really good/sad poem,you and josh are great writers keep it up!!
    x bRoKeN xx dReAmS x

  • 18 years ago

    by Marine Wife

    hey great poem... and thanx for commenting on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Great poems:') It made me cry. It's so sad. I like your poems. They're wonderful. Keep writing, i'm looking forward to reading more. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by Amba

    That was good, i specially liked the last verse the best, its unfair aye..
    very good poem tho
    5/5
    xox Bam