Daddy's Little Girl

by The Secret Keeper   Jul 10, 2005



Once a pon a time,
I was Daddy's little girl,
He said I was his world,
And I even had cute curls.

But then a day came,
When my daddy pulled me aside,
And told me a secret,
That made me cry inside.

He told me that I wasn't,
His own little girl,
He told he wasn't my daddy,
On the day he got his own little girl.

I never forgave,
That man I called Daddy,
He could have told me nicer,
Or before that very morning.

But now he sounds sad,
But I don't even feel bad,
Cause he never cared for me,
After he got Jenny.

Maybe now he knows,
How I felt that fateful day,
Just after he gave me the news,
That changed my world forever.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    wow awesome poem..quite sad though
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    How sad. So many people will be able to relate to this piece. Just having not had a father not necessarily the same situation you had.

    You lost the rhyme scheme in a few places. No big deal though it would sound better if you fixed it...either way...just so that it's all the same.

    Other than that I'd say pretty nice write! :) Take Care!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    oh dear thats really sad, i hope it hasnt affected the way you feel about yourself! great poem and thanks for commenting on mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Peaches~

    hey well i know how u feel it happened to me to and i hope life does get better for u!God still cares!

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