Some Woman

by Jeff   Jul 11, 2005


Some woman has made me cry
Some woman has been unfaithful
Some woman has put blame on me
I was not there when I was needed
I was busy entertaining another woman
I know this is not the courthouse
But I swear the allegations are untrue
I tried all I could under the sun
Should I judge all the ladies?
Big No is my bottom answer
Some women are great out there
Unselfish as much as they can be
Caring like a mother to the child
Can go miles and miles to satisfy their men
They know the az of relationships
Nothing goes smooth like childhood dreams
Games are tougher when you grow
The world has never been a better place
That is why politicians keeps lying

But some woman just does not care
Some woman almost got me killed
Some woman, is not good at all
Some woman, oh let me stop.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    I truly hope you find that love of your life and I hope she will be loving and kind, someone you truly long for. Bless you and your heart my friend.... hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Libby M

    Hi....
    I really thought that you did well with this poem. There is truth to what you say... The opposite sex can make us feel so many things, go through so much... Just always remain searching for the one that would make your heart at last feel at ease. God Bless.

    Libby

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Oh Jeff you're really struggling with your unhappiness aren't you? I hope you will meet the girl that you long for! Your poems have a sadness when it comes to matters of the heart! You let out your true feelings and that's a good thing! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Augusta

    I liked this poem, throughout it there is a sense of frustration and a little bit of defensivness... As if you don't deserve the treatment. Well, whatever...well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This poem needs a few changes. I know what your trying to say but the wording is not right. As it is I give it a 3

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